Thursday, February 7, 2008

Part Of The Plan Comments

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How can I make her see
The burning in my chest
By stares, she does not know
It's a harmful thing to carry
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Ciera Ivey
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Mary Gordley 09 February 2008

You put a great deal of emotion into this poem. Plan as we may tears will find us if our hearts are tender. But if we harden them they are likewise unable to recieve full joy. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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