This is the part of me,
You want to love,
This the part of me,
You want to take,
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One part dies and the other continue to live, like body and soul...Wonderful poem Reshma...keep up the spirit...Poets die but their poems continue to live...!
one of your best pieces yet! keep up the good work hoping you are well, the devilz lil grl
It is the immortal poetess in you that speaks through you. God bless the poetess.
wow... thought provoking... the part that is an integral entity of u... u tried exploring it bfully........
mixed feelings a psyche and physical all in one vessel, a duality of sharing and the sacred independence, you expose more of yourself than you really intended? 10 good poem cheers Shimon
Hi - a very clever piece of word craft not letting him consume all of you, knowing yoga it all fits- luvli poem, regards Ken e Hall
Loving someone is part of loving oneself, is what makes love whole! Nice romantic poem.
nice one. its more lyrics though. deep in thoughts. simple yet soo touching. gud work. all the best
An interesting poem in an interesting form. Love with 10.
The hearth of real love open its window You prayed for, This is the part of me Which you slayed, Now that it is all yours To care, to tear.
a very well written poem....