Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Part Of Me Comments

Rating: 3.6

This is the part of me,
You want to love,
This the part of me,
You want to take,
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Reshma Ramesh
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a very well written poem....

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Brenda Tamayo 20 November 2008

This poem is so truly lovely!

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Gargi Saha 05 November 2008

well written.................. Love & hugs.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 November 2008

One part dies and the other continue to live, like body and soul...Wonderful poem Reshma...keep up the spirit...Poets die but their poems continue to live...!

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helena dombrowski 04 November 2008

one of your best pieces yet! keep up the good work hoping you are well, the devilz lil grl

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Nellie Bredeson 04 November 2008

Nice poem. it beautifully written love the title.

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C. P. Sharma 04 November 2008

It is the immortal poetess in you that speaks through you. God bless the poetess.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 November 2008

wow... thought provoking... the part that is an integral entity of u... u tried exploring it bfully........

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Roger Cornish 04 November 2008

Pardoxical and inventive. Rx

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Shimon Weinroth 04 November 2008

mixed feelings a psyche and physical all in one vessel, a duality of sharing and the sacred independence, you expose more of yourself than you really intended? 10 good poem cheers Shimon

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Ken E Hall 02 November 2008

Hi - a very clever piece of word craft not letting him consume all of you, knowing yoga it all fits- luvli poem, regards Ken e Hall

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Marvin Brato 30 October 2008

Loving someone is part of loving oneself, is what makes love whole! Nice romantic poem.

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Taufeeq Yahiya 29 October 2008

nice one. its more lyrics though. deep in thoughts. simple yet soo touching. gud work. all the best

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Seema Chowdhury 28 October 2008

nicely composed poem. the title is interesting too.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

An interesting poem in an interesting form. Love with 10.

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Dr. Ram Sharma 22 October 2008

this poem contains the effect of Kamla Das

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Kee Thampi 22 October 2008

The hearth of real love open its window You prayed for, This is the part of me Which you slayed, Now that it is all yours To care, to tear.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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