Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Part From You Comments

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These are ever lasting memeories
you left me when i was in love
Years goes by and i can't talk about it
Im lost in this pitty world
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sarah frank
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I know how hard it is to forget, how impossible it is, and even how we don't want to forget. I have a fear of forgetting. I love how you describe the memories. They really seem more like scars that won't disappear on you. Very deep.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 November 2009

Emotion expressed very well... Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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James Mclain 25 November 2009

the heart was meant.. for more than just too pump blood... the heart must also carry the and some times this also.. as well as your other...iip

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sarah frank

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