Wednesday, November 26, 2008

(part 1) Unremarkable Comments

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The day I killed a leader with my brushstrokes was unremarkable.

I sat in silence, an epiphany
of thought made my pencil throb against lily
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Effie Yalena Steyn
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Patricia Grantham 13 April 2015

A remarkable poem with so many imaginations. Skillfully written with good details. Nice.

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Billy Joe Collins 26 November 2008

on a blank paper which ever we do write or pain it's a great way to get our true true feelings out great poem thanks for sharing

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Joseph Poewhit 26 November 2008

One step in front of the other

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Effie Yalena Steyn

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