You are black in colour
Your voice is hoarse
People drive you away
You are unwelcome everywhere
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Very well written in my estimation. Not just a pretty face after all. I am going to re-write this in limerck form and then throw it away bravo or, as in Italy, brava I am encouraged to pursue your work
The contradiction between two lives is presented so perfectly by the conversation of crow and parrot. enjoyed it. really it's better to live on rotten foods with freedom than dying in a golden cage without freedom.
Freedom is what above the caste, creed and colour. Freedomless life is painful. So nicely and aptly presented through the conversation among parrot and crow. Many thanks dear Asim, may God increase your poetic imagination. .......10
A poem worth reading, I liked the way you wrote it.