Saturday, August 29, 2015

Parrot And Crow - In Conversation Comments

Rating: 4.9

You are black in colour
Your voice is hoarse
People drive you away
You are unwelcome everywhere
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 01 August 2023

A poem worth reading, I liked the way you wrote it.

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Shreya Hacks 04 October 2020

A fantastic conversation nicely put across your point.

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Suzon Albert 22 July 2020

Nothing can substitute the freedom.

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Wes Vogler 13 November 2015

Very well written in my estimation. Not just a pretty face after all. I am going to re-write this in limerck form and then throw it away bravo or, as in Italy, brava I am encouraged to pursue your work

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Sanjukta Nag 30 August 2015

The contradiction between two lives is presented so perfectly by the conversation of crow and parrot. enjoyed it. really it's better to live on rotten foods with freedom than dying in a golden cage without freedom.

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2015

Thank u so much...I am glad to know that u liked it.

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T Rajan Evol 29 August 2015

Freedom is supreme...Long live crow.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2015

Freedom is what above the caste, creed and colour. Freedomless life is painful. So nicely and aptly presented through the conversation among parrot and crow. Many thanks dear Asim, may God increase your poetic imagination. .......10

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