Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Parody Of Verse! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh th't I could sing thee
the softest song parody
and words shalt melt in driblets
falling each unto its' own desire
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Geoff Warden
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Diane Violet 08 February 2007

Very nicely done Geoff, I really like the whole thing but the line 'Oh th't I, , , , , , , , , , , , , , 'a lullaby of sweet tiffany' is especially nice..............................

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 February 2007

Succinctly and tightly structured....job well done, God Sir Geoff ~ F. j. R. ~ -O2/08/07-

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Geoff Warden

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