Wednesday, February 21, 2018

Parody Of Edmund Spenser's "Amoretti" (Sonnet I) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Happy sweet hours, to try my hands
At the veg, at the dough, as I might;
Now freed at last from tangled bands,
Like a cage bird, longing for new sight.
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2018

Unaware of high waves or the rough sea, Dreaming of th' clear babbling valley brook Vivid with birds and beasts, full of glee. Life like a bird or fish me pleases alone, No need to fear the boss, and humble to none........touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 May 2018

Happy sweet hours, to try my hands At the veg, at the dough, as I might; Now freed at last from tangled bands, Like a cage bird, longing for new sight.....like the beauty of expression! A beautiful poem....10

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Perdita Young 02 May 2018

Thank you for the praise, Dillip. It's so pleasant to learn about new cuisines...We are what we eat.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

Life like a bird or fish me pleases alone, No need to fear the boss, and humble to none. An interesting poem.

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Perdita Young 02 May 2018

Thank you for reading and commenting on this parody, Mr.Jawad. Written for fun~

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