Paris, Please Accept Me, As A Human Refugee Comments

o paris................ Y paris................ the patience, eating the happiness the pain, eating the patience and the pain, eating the pain I AM SICK, paris treat me, sister paris................ o paris................ Y paris................ exile, on my papers restrained, ..

great write, I enjoyed reading it very much...smiles n blessings

So beautiful in places, I am caught in colour.

There is so much pain where you live Ahmed, peace is so illusive and I feel so sad for those caught in the crossfire.

'Tis a wonderful poem! ! ! I like this one: : Oh, all refugee birds Make your nests On the top of My peepul tree As I'm alone In this land With no cmpanioin On my branches and nor have I here a root of pedigree My leaves are silent They lost their murmur Strech your wings Under its shadow So my soul will awake By the fllutter of your words! ! ! !

I love this write, 'tis an excellent poem! ! ! Oh, refugee birds Make a nest On top of My peepul tree As I'm a tree A Refugee tree With no companion In my branches Or nor have I a root of pedigree

i'm more touched by the refugee predicament reflected in the poem...the emotion determines the style in this case quite secondary!

love it... you write with passion!