Saturday, September 22, 2018

Paris I Come Comments

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Rome was not built in a day I hear
Paris no doubt either judging now by sight 
See Paris and die they say
In peace surely I'd rest finally in view
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BELLO BIDEMI
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2019

And such majestic epitome almost at the galaxies pair What is more to live? In baffle, lost in profound gaze and thought I am When it echoes " Paris c'est Magique." Paris the city of lovers and beauty.. very nice portrayal. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 September 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Bello. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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