Saturday, November 21, 2015

Paris - A City Of Love Comments

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Under that Eiffel tower they stood
re-affirming their love for each other,
after marriage vows and wedding bells
by the Arc de Troimphe they drove,
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Bernedita Rosinha Pinto
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Godfrey Morris 21 November 2015

Great write. I enjoyed reading. Our hearts is reaching out to the City of Paris as we mourn all those innocent victims.

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Bernedita Rosinha Pinto 23 November 2015

Thanks Godfrey. I like your poem- 7 continents!

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Edmund Strolis 21 November 2015

Yes lost in the big story is the personal story, the loss, the pain, the paradox and ugly raw reality of innocents torn from their dream. I read your poem apprehensive knowing all too well where it may lead, that is a tribute to your keen ability to personalize the tragedy.Over coffee or a quarrel yet they went home holding hands, her with her scarf and him with his content smile, bumping elbows, side by side down the avenue. Wonderfully sad poem....10

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Bernedita Rosinha Pinto 21 November 2015

Edmund, thanks for your comment! You write nice poem, I liked the gypsy, the grace, the exotic maiden. Too good!

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