Monday, April 13, 2015

Parenthetical Comments

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We are parenthetical
The outside matters not
We are isolated
From the building doubt
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Josilinia Plyman
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Josilinia Plyman 21 April 2015

Thank yall, I'm not used to anyone reading the things I write. I really appreciate your comments.

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Israh Sadan 13 April 2015

I'm actually quite jealous that I didn't come up with those words; -)

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Israh Sadan 13 April 2015

I like the last verse. Describes succinctly and accurately a very real fear, and probably the biggest fear in any relationship: losing the one you're emotionally invested in.

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