Saturday, July 13, 2013

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Trust me he said, 'I'll never break your heart again'.
Hold me, he whispered, 'I'll never let you cry again'
Promises and disarming smiles broke my walls of fear again
He came like a rain and wiped out what was left of my faith.
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Gajanan Mishra 13 July 2013

trust is the main thing here in life, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Dave Walker 13 July 2013

Life's lessons can be really hard on us. A great poem.

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