Sunday, June 26, 2016

Parched! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't swim carelessly in this sea of life
Your existence is everything, but infinite
As your life ceases
So will you drown
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2021

Yes, you must smim carefully in the turbulent sea of life! Thoughtfully put

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Anjandev Roy 08 July 2021

Brilliant piece....thank u...

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 June 2016

Watch before you step out! ! Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 June 2016

Very realistic depiction of life. Shows your deep insight. You have said a lot in a few words. Very thoughtful n philosophical write.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 June 2016

Hi Aarzoo, So will you drown In an expanse of parched miseries. The contrasting images make good poetry, enjoyable reading. As usual, Aarzoo's poem is philosophical, deeply touching the heart, plays on the emotions of the reader.

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Kelly Kurt 26 June 2016

And so it goes. Nicely written, Aarzoo

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