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A blazing sun orbits the sky
Painting in pale blue expanse the futility
Of resisting the patterns of fate
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Nosheen Irfan
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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

When I look at the sky I feel the same, am ecstatic and fascinated by the grandeur of it. Full STARS

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2023

Cinematographic and poetically artistic, this deeply felt poem is as enchanting as it is unforgettably, unique. A Conatelation od Stars, dear Poetess

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Bill Cantrell 22 May 2023

Wow, the sun sets the scene, the immortal acacia tree stretches its shelter for this green eyed envy, then the muse spills it's true wants, the last two stanzas are riddles between the poet and her secret t. This is a true masterpiece, knowing the setting and the terrain helps! Be proud!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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