Parasite Comments

I see you got even. I would not want to make you mad Marea (smiles) This one should be sent to those that we knowingly take advantage of others and I am not just speaking about lovers! Total enjoyment for me! J.L.

This poem is truly amazing. It outlines perfectly human nature, in such a brutal way. Very well written. x

Parasitic... but what else is to be associated with yet another superior trait of human nature?

its good piece and its was so honest. i like the way started the peom

an excellent write, this'parasite'. there will always be someone who thinks that a woman should be' used' and 'abused'.their ignorence will always show, but their mind is very slow. another ten! and if anyone thinks that a women can be their toy then they should read one of my ' i am series' 'i am woman'

Oh, I rather liked this one. The plot was excellently drafted out and your vocabulary usage is awesome. The rhythm is again outstanding. Looking forward to more of your work.

This one I like, I want you to keep up the good work. And I hope you make more of this type of poem. :) **James Wilhoite II**