Friday, March 24, 2017

Paranoid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rage beneath every smile
Hate cements the wall of every house
Fury corrodes and burns
Green patches of love long gone
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Payal Priya
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Daniel Jones 28 March 2017

Very well written poem, the rhythm of the lines creates a feel of stress and anxiety, I love the line 'with nervously shaking hands, that fail to pray, great work! Thank you

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Siddartha Montik 28 March 2017

Nice Observations and precise expression. And sure many are victims of Society of the time.. but to be Paranoid. Liked the Verses and the way you way the Poet clubbed them! 10+++

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Dr. Yahya 27 March 2017

A good description of modern society.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2017

Green patches of love long gone! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Payal Priya 25 March 2017

Thank you Robert.Glad you read it.☺

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