Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Paranoid Comments

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They're drawing us in
By their subtle design,
Desiring to know
What's your and what's mine.
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John Carter Brown
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Heather Wilson 12 December 2012

Then keep it all close to your heart right from the start, a great write with good advice, liked the warning.

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Stevie Taite 29 November 2012

This is a great poem my friend! Full of lots a lots of truth. Very relevant ramble structured. into a clever poem!

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Kelvin Owusu 27 November 2012

a great poem a truth spoken in this piece great job John.

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Valerie Dohren 27 November 2012

And on top of all that, we've got viruses and bugs to contend with too - but would we be without them, naw! ! Good one John.

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