Friday, August 19, 2005

Paranoia Comments

Rating: 4.7

Trapped in chaos, thoughts untamed
I want to focus, let calm remain,
Afraid these thoughts, escape my head
Embarrassed by, the things I said,
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David Gerardino 19 August 2005

OK, it kinda goes with your other poems, its good, but could be shortend, maybe not..............

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Alc Harris

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