Thursday, January 21, 2016

Paranoia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sea of confusion leading to imagined storms
Shadows, thunder, lightning afflict the soul
Dangerous manifestations lurk around
Ghostly sharks encircle the mind
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Elena Sandu 23 May 2019

I love this creation, its words are suggesting the pains and sufferings but also its form, love how it starts as an enlarged idea imaging more things, to end in a small suffocating word that lets no breathing air. Amazing portray of paranoia, well done, thank you for share.

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Luz Hanaii 23 May 2019

I appreciate your nice comment.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 January 2016

Unique individualistic style of writing. Well expressed thoughts in amazing imagery.

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