Wednesday, June 7, 2017

Paranoia Comments

Rating: 4.5

I didn't do it. I wasn't there!
Why does everyone gasp and stare?

What's that you say? I can't remember.
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Clyde King
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BRI EDWARDS 25 February 2021

CUTE POEM, YOU NUT CASE. BUT I THINK I SEE TWO 'L' IN 'ZEALL' BRI : )

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Clyde King 28 September 2022

Once again Bri, your grasp of the obvious is stunning. My congratulations! But, look again-‘zeal' has one ‘L.' You mistook an exclamation point for an ‘L.'

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 June 2017

Heartiest Congrats on the poem of the Day for this intriguing and humorous poem.

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thanks Ratnakar. I didn’t know it was poem of the day! Wow!

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 June 2017

Hi Clyde, Congrats on the poem of the day.

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thank you. I just now found out it was poem of the day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2017

I can't remember! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thank you Edward. I was thinking about Robert Browning’s poetry when I did this.

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Your poem is so funny.. a ten...

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thank you Lorraine. I just now learned it was poem of the day. Glad you saw the humor in it.

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Mazwi Sedibe 14 June 2017

Hahaha! Call my therapist now, He'll tell you alright. If you're not going to charge me, I'll say goodnight! The title fits the whole poem well. thank you

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thank you Mazwi, glad you enjoyed it.

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Tom Allport 14 June 2017

a poem of words that sing along to a worrying sad story of not knowing of doing wrong? ..........wonderfully written... PS love the artwork? Pollock-esque? Na only kidding yours? is much more contemporary that his old drippy style.

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thank you Tom. Yes, that’s a small abstract I did and just added in because it looks like the work of a disturbed mind. All great disturbed minds think alike!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 June 2017

Congrats on being chosen for the day... i rate it 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST... Thanks...

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Thanks Bernard, I will read your poems.

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Kim Barney 14 June 2017

Very well done. I thought I had left a comment on this before, but in any case, congrats on poem of the day! By the way, just because you are paranoid, doesn't mean they're NOT out to get you!

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Clyde King 16 September 2018

Very true! Never look behind you because something might be gaining on you. Thanks for your vote. I’m honored.

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