Paranoia Comments

It's the real Paranoia played here with rhymes. Beautiful write. Something different.

Poems in the D-Structure of the poet are never understood completely, this one looks like a juvenile, suspense drama...with the role of punctuation and the play of rhymes and sounds!

Groping in the dark, you couldn't locate the switch Or in your panic, you forgot where it was By the time you understood what it was You had left your bed, wet and soaking...... Very courageous young fellow! Condolences! ! Great play of sounds, Aswath! Congrats! !

A tough poet you are and it is a hard poem for me.. Can't understand and need second and third reading..