Parallelism Or Clear Nights Comments

A meaningful poem about woven beautifully.Pathway to clear nights.........

When all haze that clouds our minds eradicated, clearer nights would beckon and shimmer, entertaining jubilant life.Excellent writes Tsira!

and bright days wil begin...10

Tsira you astound with your insight, a real feeling of inner self, portrayed with a golden pen Thankyou Chris 10 Please keep yourself and family safe in these troubled times

Oh! When i have read this poem i feel pleasure, becouse i remember that night in my city L O L

perceptive in its own way...A unique work with such brilliance in its simplicity... Cate

'...you will not get tired there is no time...' this line is an insightful interpolation...a beauty of its own...10

And you eternally awake. And eternally you will unsatisfied... And your dream will be live....... finishing lines of this poem gives a definite thought, a well balanced one A very good composition