Travelers on parallel paths.
We stopped and talked
…Compared life’s maps
Found consolation in the
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You know, this poem is so close to the cutting edge of a great sonnet...not that it isn't a gem as is...but, I kept getting the idea of cadence and rythmn when i read it. What say you, sir? ? ? xxxElysabeth
Think this could be a swansong for all those travellers who pass through the lanes of PH..... lovely write Zen. HG: -) xx
A top class write. 'consolation in the validation of knowing we are not alone' is one hugely memorable line applicable to so many things... t x
Can only agree with the preceeding comments - shall have to look up the thesaraus for more words meaning 'beautiful'! Hugs Anna xxx
Oh, Zen, this is just as beautiful as anyone could hope for on a sizzling hot Monday morning. What an unexpected flower is right!
Heaven knows why I didn'tread this before...but it's very lovely Zen! ! I have shared parallel paths...and find comfort in the fact that there is someone else out there who shares many of the same thoughts and feelings that I do. Hugs, Dee