Monday, March 12, 2007

Parallel Paths Comments

Rating: 5.0

Travelers on parallel paths.
We stopped and talked
…Compared life’s maps
Found consolation in the
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Zen Bojczuk
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Dee Daffodil 29 February 2008

Heaven knows why I didn'tread this before...but it's very lovely Zen! ! I have shared parallel paths...and find comfort in the fact that there is someone else out there who shares many of the same thoughts and feelings that I do. Hugs, Dee

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Elysabeth Faslund 15 September 2007

You know, this poem is so close to the cutting edge of a great sonnet...not that it isn't a gem as is...but, I kept getting the idea of cadence and rythmn when i read it. What say you, sir? ? ? xxxElysabeth

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Original Unknown Girl 20 March 2007

Think this could be a swansong for all those travellers who pass through the lanes of PH..... lovely write Zen. HG: -) xx

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A top class write. 'consolation in the validation of knowing we are not alone' is one hugely memorable line applicable to so many things... t x

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Anna Russell 13 March 2007

Can only agree with the preceeding comments - shall have to look up the thesaraus for more words meaning 'beautiful'! Hugs Anna xxx

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Oh, Zen, this is just as beautiful as anyone could hope for on a sizzling hot Monday morning. What an unexpected flower is right!

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