Parallel 69 { A Pentad-Senryu }(Sensual Content) Comments

Revisiting your poem values more to witness your brilliance in expression. Climax of the night is full of love and light. You are very clever enough to express romanticism in this poem.

Your morning eyes speak, That last night be no dream; Say, Yes, that you're mine. Breakfast in bed, Lov', As together we will dine, At parallel sixty-nine! ..........romantic expression. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.