Friday, December 2, 2005

Parallax Comments

Rating: 4.8

We are teetering on the brink of change
the way dusk totters on the edge of day.
The summer blinks into brisk nights.
Nothing’s changed- no, not yet- but
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Catherine Elaine
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Esther Leclerc 08 March 2006

Absolutely love the last stanza... The poem conveys well a sense of time, place and emotion.

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