Tuesday, November 11, 2008

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Rating: 4.6

Blazing red
Ascetic saffron
Appeal to me
In same tone
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Sathya Narayana
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Raja Basu 07 February 2009

Really entertaining.

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really good poem.i love it!

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Zoleka Lusiti 12 December 2008

Simple and rythm is and sounds bold! Well written, I like it and give 10+++

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

STriking differences well brought out here. U get 10++...........

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Dr Kamran Haider 04 December 2008

This is simply a wow... simple but so deep... More I read from you, more I love poetry...10 ++++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 December 2008

Rishi Marx is linked with Rebel Manu from the reverse side. It should be Rebel Marx and Rishi Manu from the positive side, I feel.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 30 November 2008

very deep, yet perfect in simplicity great poem

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Ershad Mazumder 22 November 2008

Yes, I like this style very much.Very simple with deep message. I have read veadas, Upnishadas and Geeta.Thanks.

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Jyoti Saxena 22 November 2008

rishi marx- rebel manu- u very well expound the universal tolerence which is the essence of hinduism-we respect every one for what they are -an indian rebel or a foregn rishi -yr work are in sync with my thougt pattern--full 10

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Raja Basu 21 November 2008

Superb. A sound philosophical observation expressed in a light tone.

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Karla Bardanza 21 November 2008

I wish I could say more than it is a beautiful poem.I am not familiarize with its content.Sorry Dear Sathya Narayana! I am Brazilian! Best wishes Karla Bardanza

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Matthew Wood 18 November 2008

Rather good, I've read this style before, you did I good job. I don't have must experience as a critic so there.

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Mula Veereswara Rao 17 November 2008

Still some more lines needed to make impact on readers.Personally i don't like Manu and i wrote in telugu stree vada kavita 'manuvu kalam nundi tanuvu daasyam lone'.Good attempt.Sir you have not passed comments on my poem; Politicians-satire'

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Ben Gieske 17 November 2008

I like the format of this poem. Unfortunately I am not familiar with most of the content; consequently, it does not mean much to me. I think it would be an effective poem for those who are. However, it does tell me something about you the poet-person.

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Anjali Sinha 16 November 2008

good flow smooth poetry--- but red and saffron no longer appeal me as in their name lots of attrocieties happen in India.--So right now for me its BEWARE red ---saffron---beware. regards anju

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

i love it it is truely nice.

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Seema Chowdhury 15 November 2008

your opening lines are very catchy. the flow is nice.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 November 2008

format is good, thought is superb, words selsection is good. simple lucid, it entrals the readers. well done

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Carl Harris 15 November 2008

It is difficult, if not impossible, to write a review of a poem which has for it's subject things I am totally unfamiliar with, Sathya. I liked the format of your poem and got to wondering that it would be better if it rhymed. I have noticed a lot of the younger poets avoid the challenge of rhyming and just write their poems in the free style form. A lot of times, what they write are not really poems, just loosely tied together thoughts, if they are connected at all. That, of course, is not the case with this poem, which speaks of a specific topic and how two different people with totally different styles arrived at the same conclusion. At least that's how I interpret what you said in this poem. Carl.

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Costa Anakiev 15 November 2008

sorry, but i couldn't understand some ideas

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