Paradox (Monoku) Comments

Wonderful expression in its utter brevity. Liked it.5 stars.

Poignant rendition of words set aside for sober reflection. A thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.

The 'Now' when pain is present, does seem permanent. Nicely conceived and written.

Brilliant is the only word that comes to mind when reading this monoku.

Some pains are permanent..Wonderful write

A very short write with great impact. Beautifully crafted.10

Hi Bipasha, I love this Monoku format very much as it is very challenging.....undoubtedly you have excelled...thank you- -10

Hi Bipasha, Very profound thought. Expressed in just a handful words. Lovely. Congrats for this very classy post.