Thursday, September 11, 2014

Paradox Comments

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Paradox
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Here dwells the paradise
Greenery all around
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2014

Beautiful poem with a great message. Very true said, communication gap can bring the relationships wider though they many be very near. This is especially regarding to life of many people who face such situation in their day to day life. I loved the you presented this topic. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 12 September 2014

It is unfortunate that there arises such a communication gap between people who are physically so near but mentally miles apart! This silence, growing among couples leads to the disruption of family life! The initial joy of marriage disappears and boredom sets in! You have beautifully dealt with a very cardinal problem that causes ruptures in relationships! A great write, Deepak!

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Dinesan Madathil 11 September 2014

Life has its own intricate phases of joys and woes and you have given a portrait of the paradoxical image of it. The poem seeks to know the interiors of mindsets apparently hidden.A poem that very strong in its content value Deepakji.

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