Thursday, June 21, 2012

Paradox Comments

Rating: 3.2

Your kiss, like a poets soul
engraved in my translucent self
paradise in seclusion, feeding my own desires.
A bouquet of flowers your kiss brought
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Kasia Fedyk
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Ross Mackay 08 July 2012

Very nice! A fine addition :)

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Valerie Dohren 03 July 2012

Beautiful poem, deep and meaningful.

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Adeline Foster 22 June 2012

Enigmatic, with a message between the lines. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline

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Ency Bearis 22 June 2012

lovely poem and well written with the twist, nice to read

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Simon Collins 22 June 2012

Very edgy words Kasia, brave, enjoyable

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