Paradox Comments

'polished gems of the first water' beautiful line my dear your poem can catch even the coldest hearts

Do not wait in it for a life laurel a diadem, do not like live classics... It too paradox but the ruthless fact... The kindest regards... Tsira

I very much agree with Tara here, that you have such an amazing talent with word structure, and that fourth stanza is beautiful....evoking feelings I didn't know were there until I read what you wrote. Wonderful writing, just awesome! !

For some (or no) reason, there is always a particular stanza in your pieces that utterly stands out to me and grips me. This time it is the fourth. Why, why, why can't I ever put together such words? ! t x