Thursday, September 4, 2014

'Paradise' Regained Comments

Rating: 3.5

Out you spluttered from blinding mist
Morning dews splashed under feet.
Always just in time,
The beetle took its flight
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Wenjun Liu
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Mohammad Skati 04 September 2014

It's a pretty poem that shows the true feelings of the poet.

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Mohammad Skati 04 September 2014

It's a pretty poem that shows the true feelings of the poet.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 September 2014

kiss on the forehead, good writing, thanks.

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