***paradise-(Part 6) -The Naked Man Comments

Again, you held my interest till the end. fuuny thing is, that poem really could of happened these days..

How i did omit this before? Maybe because of the title :) What an omission! It is so funny and interesting narrated, with notes of suspense, action and lot of fun!

Coach.... I want more (sic)

I don't think I have ever, EVER, laughed out loud at a piece on here before. A squillion marks for you! t x

This one must be true! It's too ridiculous to be fiction. Like the delivery of this one Coach - you have a great ear for comedy. I wish I'd been there. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

And the hits just keep coming...bada-bum! Coach....you are indeed the Pied Piper of PH tale-telling, my friend! ....Keep this up...and you may not only resurrect this site....but bring back th majesty of Vaudville, as well! Premium Penning, my friend... ~ FjR ~ ..2008..