***paradise-(Part 2) -Yum Yum Donots Comments

You show the dignity of your indigent and the indignity of his treatment by your donot man with great skill, Coach. leaving the reader angry and ashamed. Your own part in this appalling scenario must have hurt. You share it unashamedly and honestly. Strong stuff. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Oh dear, heartbreaking stuff here. You write so well... leading us to the next chapter. Brilliant stuff. HG: -) xx

Aaagh Coach... helpless does not equate to hopeless, heartfelt lessons - breaking rules versus keeping a brake on the rules.... keep writing them One Peace at a Time