Paradise Or Hell! Comments

It’s a place of love, happiness and peace A place where all our burdens shall cease Truly there is coming such a day A place to free every man of this world’s test Sad for whom due to sin leave out the best .... nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

ok, I don’t agree with the gist of the poem, but many will agree and like it. I choose this one to be the second of yours to put in my/our showcase for JULY. bri :)

Great rhythm and flow with lovely lines, that promise salvation for us all if we live to love and forgive that is a recipe for a better world!

Yes, there comes a Day of final Judgement when our actions will be weighed and reward will be given! So strive hard to accumulate wealth for the life to come! Very prophetic write!