Thursday, March 12, 2015

Paradise On Earth! Comments

Rating: 4.5

The Sun shines as gold, down the west
Full moon is on the move, to rise in the east

Birds are settling, into the nest
Courteous caress of the breeze, is the best!
...
Read full text

V.Muthu Manickam
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 16 April 2017

Amazing poem about the charm of nature unfolding itself at the fall of night. Lovely write. Thanks. Birds are settling, into the nest Courteous caress of the breeze, is the best!

0 0 Reply
Vmuthu Manickam 16 April 2017

In such a place, in such a situation, the above was written, as seen and felt. Thanks to God for creating such environment on that enjoyable day! Thanks to you too Mr. Manga! More shall come, sure! !

0 0
Chinedu Dike 12 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry beautifully brought forth in poetic diction. A well formed description of colourful onset of dusk filled with bliss. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
Vmuthu Manickam 17 March 2015

Thank you very much. It shall inspire me.

0 0
V.Muthu Manickam

V.Muthu Manickam

Peraiyur, Madurai District, India
Close
Error Success