Monday, August 1, 2011

Paradise Of Love Comments

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It's another one night,
Statued together tight,
A precious tender moment,
It's gonna be all right.
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Hudhaifah Siyad
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Aqeb Benazir 11 August 2011

this poem has an impressive touch...nice work! ! although It felt like you could have written more and more. but it has great cohesiveness and brevity is always a good touch. keep it up.

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