Paradise Lost Comments

A beautiful write! It strikes deep while maintaining the flow and beauty of poetry. An impressive writing style, I must say.😊

With dawn another awakening, blooming with a dream. A beautiful write, Vijay! The allusion and your writing style is commendable.

Lovely poem! Nice wording!

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your lost paradise is limited to a dream, and still it is vivaciously fine in its succession. the poetic galore is well-maintained, and deserves much appreciation. the only thing i am not very happy is the limited content. thats ok. may be because, i had great expectation from the title, when you jotted me. wonderful. great to know you, dear Vijay. i just posted a few, if time ever permits, please bless.

i like it...nice.... keep it up,

sai you have rising thoughts................keep writing

its beautiful and yeah you have good ideas.i like it.anyway keep it up as writting helps and thanks for inviting me to read your poem

its beautiful i love it! ! for each people its different way.and thanks for inviting me to read your poem

Good thought. I remember 48 years ago I read a book of Paradise Lost, Paradise Regained. When I finished it with a very little knowledge of English language, I was ready for paradise. However, it is our human being that we look for the paradise, but if you check out my poems, until we are in this Earth we never have it. Life is a school room, where we get lessons. If we solve one, we go to the other one. We can arrive to a peace in our soul and true happiness but we still have to solve our every day upcoming problems.

Thank you for this lovely poem, involving vivid imagination! I suppose we all have our paradise where and when we choose to. For many, this abstract concept lies in poetry and the rich introspective consciousness we get to explore as poets...My I invite you to read my poem The Poet which incorporated another type of proverbial paradise I think you may enjoy!

A melodramatic modernised manipulation of the title of the Old Classic piece... An arresting poem....

Nicely penned and quite wonderful, thumps up.

Good piece. Striking!

It's really awesome! ! ! ! you have done total justice with the vocabulary and verse! ! ! Appreciable! ! ! ! !

nyc piece....i love it and hope your students do too

This is beautiful! I love it-

This is great! ! Good job :)

this is lovely poem i love it.i thing already read to ''''john milton paradise lost''''

this is lovely i love the rhythm and the message gd job