Paradise Lost Poem by Vijay Sai R

It's really awesome! ! ! ! you have done total justice with the vocabulary and verse! ! ! Appreciable! ! ! ! !

nyc piece....i love it and hope your students do too

This is beautiful! I love it-

This is great! ! Good job :)

this is lovely poem i love it.i thing already read to ''''john milton paradise lost''''

A beautiful write! It strikes deep while maintaining the flow and beauty of poetry. An impressive writing style, I must say.😊

With dawn another awakening, blooming with a dream. A beautiful write, Vijay! The allusion and your writing style is commendable.

Lovely poem! Nice wording!

Went to the trouble of writing a sensible critique but this silly website kept insisting that the verification code was wrong although carefully copied several times.

your lost paradise is limited to a dream, and still it is vivaciously fine in its succession. the poetic galore is well-maintained, and deserves much appreciation. the only thing i am not very happy is the limited content. thats ok. may be because, i had great expectation from the title, when you jotted me. wonderful. great to know you, dear Vijay. i just posted a few, if time ever permits, please bless.