Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Paradise Lost Comments

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Paradise Lost

Paradise killed by greed and hate,
A lost chance for mankind,
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Christopher Tye
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Cigeng Zhang 29 September 2016

I could read the sense of the social responsibility of a poet from your work. A wonderful acrostic poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 September 2016

A great poem on man's unfair attitudes and behaviours.! Splendid metaphorical phrases employed here. Fine freeverse acrostic indeed a paradise lost. Pls do review my latest poem called Poetry commentary.....

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2016

By greed and hate! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Christopher Tye

Christopher Tye

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