She was my Eve
I was her Adam
Every night we used to sit
In our Garden in the Eden
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A clever piece of writing, and a pleasure to read. A memorable write indeed.
A clever piece of writing, and a pleasure to read. A memorable write indeed.
Great imagination! Do you still look for your missing counterpart? Every Adam, it seems is in perennial search after his missing rib! Enjoyed this romantic ditty!
the tale of Adam and Eve as an imagery of male and female..but it took u turn at end, , Adam and Eve they met each other on earth but here Thus we were separated By light years forever. poets thought
I am here to review the comments made on this poem. A falling star would have killed both this Adam and his Eve. But I'm not sure the star would have disintegrated in our atmosphere. Or was it an asteroid? The reviewers here are writing only to flatter. That's sad; is PH becoming a Mutual Admiration Society. The blind leading the blind?