Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Paradise Lost Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The dragons of Eden claw at my heart,
They give me no relief;
I agreed to this, and like a good slave
I pretend he's Adam and I'm Eve
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Khairul Ahsan 12 March 2014

The poem is simply beautiful! 10/10. 'Let me go to the one who owns my heart, And Paradise will be restored! ' - Humans think like this, God otherwise.

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

a lovely poem inspired by the garden of eden. nice work

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Valerie Dohren 20 May 2013

A beautiful poem Lora, a very clever and inspired write. Well done.

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