Paradise Girl Comments

Beautifully presented...

A great message for the society.....well written....keep it up...

I understand what you mean, although in Europe this problem is not so sharp.

Hi Tanya, writting poem is important.

Well said Tanya - the world still has a great deal to learn, and a great deal to account for over this issue.

Very nice poem Tanya. You will be sure be a poet. Just keep on to your way, once you shall reach the destination. Thanks

thankyou so much mr.mahur and all

Dear Tanya, I would just say WAO! great poem with elaborate thoughts. Congratulations on reaching top 20 Indian poets you are not far behind. I wish you come up to pass by me. Good luck. Reply soon. You have a big bulk to read no. of my poems is now above 300. Thank!

great beautiful poem...I pray that eventually your struggle might work for the betterment of the society

Oh paradise girl, don't feel that girls are separate from the boys in this physic world. really we have to change the notion of our society with a little attempt like this.

Tanya, this is a true anthem for female emancipation. A hundred years ago, in England, we had a lady named Emily Pankhurst. She too stood for womankind, and eventually won women the right to vote. She would have been proud to know you. Keep writing.

I can understand your feelings being a girl......tanya.......your crusade against female abuse is a holy one and through your creative writing you can change negative mind trends a lot.........a good cause for good read......