Tuesday, June 26, 2007

Paradise Found Comments

Rating: 5.0

Captured in the suns warm glow
Bound and tethered 'neath it's beams
Gladdened by the sapphire sky
Realizing my summertime dream
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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JoAnn McGrath 26 June 2007

your words just quietly rippled over this piece and add to the paradise picture: O)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 26 June 2007

This is just a beautiful image theodora.. Briliant write you can feel the heat in the summer sun in this poem...10

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Patricia Gale 26 June 2007

Beautiful Theodora, your wonderful imagery paints a heavenly portrait....

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