Paradise Come Comments

Well composed.........meaningful piece........thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

Shakespear brooded Lifted me poet Shook twice Only to find His spirt Fits just right In his skeletal frame Pranky cranky jolly guy Spilling here some Poking there one Just like squiral Enjoying his world The paradise Often unnoticed. Hope this paints helps you find your paradise.

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Contentment hard to find. In this " Fools' Paradise" Here, you've made and have A pretty good try And a soothing fine design. Well done, my friend!