Friday, July 4, 2014

Paradise City Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vegas, notorious as the city of sin,
My sweet city of paradise,
Where all can play in sinful delight.
Towering hotels and painted palm trees
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Leah Ayliffe
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Bri Edwards 24 April 2017

No morale to dictate the confusion in my soul, ...........i question morale; is it the word you want? yes, fantasy indeed! i got questioned, my only time in Vegas, by security guards while i was using binoculars to bird watch near our hotel: Flamingo! nice. a pole in a limo could be fun, or just IN THE WAY! bri ;) t MyPoemList.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2016

The way of peace is the joy of the heart! But, sin leads to Death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hannington Mumo 14 June 2015

A riveting poem by a real professional wanderer. I like every word...10/10...

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Vegas, notorious as the city of sin, My sweet city of paradise, Where all can play in sinful delight. Towering hotels and painted palm trees line the strip where we pretty girls walk the night. A picture of Vegas

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 July 2014

No morale to dictate the confusion in my soul, I can be whoever I want, I can even be me the most precious freedom exquisitely crafted in these lines.

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Colleen Courtney 04 July 2014

Wow...a great depiction of the life of a Las Vegas showgirl? Stripper? Hooker? Take our pick I guess! Lol. You've given us such a wonderfully vivid picture of life on the streets of Vegas. So very nicely done!

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Gajanan Mishra 04 July 2014

smiling and divine in the lime light, good writing, thanks.

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