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Rippling blue, sky's reflection,
Sea and river, winds direction.
Water lapping, briskly flowing,
Twinkling facets, motion growing.
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Beautiful words chosen in this descriptive writing...You write well. Thank you. Jeannie.
This is wonderful Ernestine - superb contrasts of the calm before and after the storm - extremely visual with lovely unforced rhymes. Love it. Justine
I love the way you styled this one Ernestine, like the before/during and after of a storm coming to rest in the silence of solitude, beautiful reaful feel to it Take care Love duncan X
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7/25/2025 8:53:42 PM # 1.0.0
Another great work Ernestine, you describe the coming and passing of a storm so well, wonderful! Love, Andrew xx