Paradise: A Sonnet Comments

Can't believe you when you say that rhyme isn't really your scene: this is a gorgeous piece of writing! As well as the rhyme, there's the language, the rhythm, and the deep, probing message about growing and learning. Lovely writing, Maxy.

A beautifully crafted sonnet.

Your skill with this sonnet is impressive, Max. Let's have more of these. The idea expressed within this poem are sound and universal. Thanks for sharing it. Raynette

What a beautiful write Max, a lovely poem that flowed so well and made a lovely read. Love Ernestine XXX

This poem caught my interest. I suppose we've all been to 'a paradise or two' and those who manage to stay there forever are the lucky ones. Me? I simply dream about it.