Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking across the endless vast
contemplating on the past
the water sways here and there
it is in this one moment I have no care
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C.R. Clark 13 February 2009

A fine write, Kelly. It seems you have found your Shangri La. Beautiful. Richard

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~ Jon London ~ 11 February 2009

Ahhh to find such a place would be so perfect in this crazy place we call home. A Brilliant 10 Jon

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Balbino Crespo 11 February 2009

i like very much, wish i could find paradise and a women like you to complete the feeling of being in love...

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