Friday, July 28, 2006
Paradise Comments
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Everest carved to hollow cone
Floored with finest beach sand
Stars grouped to a sparkling moon
And moon made to a table lamp
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7/21/2025 10:50:41 AM # 1.0.0
A very nice approach to the poem makes it charming. I like the transformations you show in this work: this to that and that to this. Specially this line read so sweet: Stars grouped to a sparkling moon...The last line made it all complete. Nibedita Deb.