Paradise Comments
Slipped into sleep.Mind got into whirls
What a fantastic place mine was
River Varaha from the western hills
Into my village bifurcating north and south
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Yes, the paradise is here on earth, your poem paints a lively picture of such a paradise
Rich flow of thought with powerful images of beauty. Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing.
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8/17/2025 11:35:25 PM # 1.0.0
Mam, this is a fabulous poem with imagery...5 stars